tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post5606578906384988975..comments2023-10-16T07:16:44.515-05:00Comments on Habitual Rhymer : Happy First Birthday To My Blog!Lori Degmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-17827675946406684842010-04-07T22:04:17.461-05:002010-04-07T22:04:17.461-05:00M - you earned yourself two entries - cute poem!!M - you earned yourself two entries - cute poem!!Lori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-70280241705747678912010-04-07T13:09:15.888-05:002010-04-07T13:09:15.888-05:00I'd love for you to take a peak.
My story sure...I'd love for you to take a peak.<br />My story surely needs critique!<br /><br />It's not easy to write in rhyme.<br />I should practice all the time.<br /><br />I need some help it's plain to see.<br />You're the expert. Me? Trainee.Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00426532657235920537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-87617996782592505212010-04-06T17:53:15.611-05:002010-04-06T17:53:15.611-05:00Really cute poem, Bernell! I put two entries in f...Really cute poem, Bernell! I put two entries in for you :-)Lori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-76549461939863049662010-04-06T10:55:39.496-05:002010-04-06T10:55:39.496-05:00An agent asked to see my work
I'll send it soo...An agent asked to see my work<br />I'll send it soon, I shall not shirk<br /><br />And though I know it's quite a crime<br />I plan to sub a book in rhyme <br /><br />My little tale must have its way<br />Will your critique help save the day?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249020076983467098noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-33525525945173779432010-04-06T07:37:44.826-05:002010-04-06T07:37:44.826-05:00Wow,good thing doing a critique doesn't involv...Wow,good thing doing a critique doesn't involve math! Don't worry, I rhyme better than I add!<br /><br />Sally - I gave you another entry. If you win, you'll have to thank Evonne!Lori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-84868978265565425642010-04-06T07:30:15.874-05:002010-04-06T07:30:15.874-05:00Thanks so much! Also...I think Sally (who posted a...Thanks so much! Also...I think Sally (who posted after me) also should get 3 entries.....Esperantohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12051691926591464516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-31016667347575619362010-04-05T20:11:48.429-05:002010-04-05T20:11:48.429-05:00I'm sorry, Evonne! I just put in your third e...I'm sorry, Evonne! I just put in your third entry!Lori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-68767884613386282272010-04-05T19:52:15.834-05:002010-04-05T19:52:15.834-05:00Lori - Can I get three entries too? (You said you ...Lori - Can I get three entries too? (You said you put me in for two, but I did the comment, poem, and link from my blog, so that's 3 right?) Thanks!! Evonne from Empty FridgeEsperantohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12051691926591464516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-44618410551459865192010-04-05T19:38:23.912-05:002010-04-05T19:38:23.912-05:00Abigail, it's amazing how five words can say s...Abigail, it's amazing how five words can say so much - well done! <br /><br />Leslie - what a fun, bedtime rhyme! <br /><br />You've each earned three entries! <br /><br />Thanks so much for playing!Lori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-19816840161649212622010-04-05T15:59:24.480-05:002010-04-05T15:59:24.480-05:00Drum roll please.....
IT's JUST....
Get to b...Drum roll please.....<br /><br />IT's JUST....<br /><br />Get to bed, already?<br />Are you certain of the time?<br />If we wait until it’s dark in China<br />That would be fine <br /><br />Yes, rest is necessary <br />I know that for a fact<br />Please excuse me just one moment<br />I promise I’ll be right back<br /><br />It’s not that I won’t sleep,<br />It’s just that well, wait!<br />There’s a three ring circus performance <br />It starts promptly at eight!<br /><br />No, that wasn’t a yawn you saw <br />But instead a long sigh <br />To sleep now means I’ll miss <br />Eating the world’s largest apple pie!<br /><br />It’s not that I’m not listening to you<br />It’s just that, hold on!<br />Nursery rhyme village just called -<br />Humpty Dumpty is gone!<br /><br />I’m afraid I must go at once<br />The village is counting on me<br />I must go quickly <br />The back of my eyelids I’m starting to see <br /><br />For it’s not that I can’t sleep <br />It’s just that, I’m not tired yet<br />Probably one more tuck, kiss and hug<br />Then I’ll be all set<br /><br />Thanks for the fun Lori!<br /><br />leslie<br /><br />mayihaveawordwithu.blogspot.com <br />comleslienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-87470715461806809722010-04-05T15:01:59.029-05:002010-04-05T15:01:59.029-05:00Would love to enter!
My little poem:
Spring
fall...Would love to enter!<br /><br />My little poem:<br /><br />Spring<br />falls<br />softly<br />after<br />winter.<br /><br />I've posted your blog on my livejournal. <br /><br />AbigailHWAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-41958222054088420132010-04-03T09:26:29.958-05:002010-04-03T09:26:29.958-05:00Empty Refrigerator & Sally - love the poems - ...Empty Refrigerator & Sally - love the poems - I put in two entries for you!<br /><br />Diane - I've been called much worse :-) Thanks for entering!Lori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-89553446917204625702010-04-02T23:26:51.700-05:002010-04-02T23:26:51.700-05:00Here I am, trying to get a free critique --
More t...Here I am, trying to get a free critique --<br />More than a little, literary peek <br />And plus some cool aid --<br />Oh yes, through my brand new blog, I told everyone<br />About the post of the often rhyming maid...<br />(I hope you don't get offended by that one.)Diane H.http://ladysulat.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-13274010105606213552010-04-02T22:21:36.133-05:002010-04-02T22:21:36.133-05:00I blogged about your contest,
go read it, please, ...<a href="http://www.sally-apokedak.com/whispers_of_dawn/2010/04/enter-win-free-pb-critique/" rel="nofollow">I blogged about your contest,<br />go read it, please, right now.</a><br />I want as many entries, <br />as the judges will allow,<br /><br />I really need a bunch of help--<br />my rhyming is so lame,<br />But even if I do not win<br />I've sure enjoyed the game.sally https://www.blogger.com/profile/11068670473065918371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-53379580056311530872010-04-02T19:33:32.652-05:002010-04-02T19:33:32.652-05:00I linked to this from my blog....I linked to this from my blog....Esperantohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12051691926591464516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-45984981120936431152010-04-02T19:11:02.721-05:002010-04-02T19:11:02.721-05:00Yes, I want to enter
I have a draft under my bed
I...Yes, I want to enter<br />I have a draft under my bed<br />It rhymes, it sings, it has a plot<br />But to agent-land, I daren't treadEsperantohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12051691926591464516noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-41941782811662068832010-04-02T15:36:09.521-05:002010-04-02T15:36:09.521-05:00Cute poem, Sheri! I'll put in another entry f...Cute poem, Sheri! I'll put in another entry for you.Lori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-31675400682100884952010-04-02T14:55:51.533-05:002010-04-02T14:55:51.533-05:00Sure! Here it is:
Did you know
a Cheerio
has mor...Sure! Here it is:<br /><br />Did you know<br />a Cheerio<br />has more than just great looks?<br /><br />It has great TASTE<br />so shares its space<br />with Lori Degman's books!<br /><br />(Please excuse the near-rhyme!) :)<br /><br />SheriSheri Dillardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04080158062172372260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-83463825294537538742010-04-02T14:24:21.139-05:002010-04-02T14:24:21.139-05:00Thanks so much for leaving comments!
Sheri - want...Thanks so much for leaving comments!<br /><br />Sheri - want to leave a little poem for an extra entry?<br /><br />Aniprof - cute poem - you've got two entries<br /><br />If you decide to put a link on your blog, let me know and I'll put in another entry for you.<br /><br />Catwoods - thanks for leaving a comment even though you don't have a rhymer! <br /><br />LoriLori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-1739246262662467282010-04-02T14:17:28.788-05:002010-04-02T14:17:28.788-05:00Happy birthday. I found you on VK and am glad. Y...Happy birthday. I found you on VK and am glad. Your book looks like the bomb! Super cute.<br /><br />As much as I would love to enter, I don't have a rhymer to share : (Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-23930525819894703202010-04-02T13:24:58.684-05:002010-04-02T13:24:58.684-05:00Hey Lori, one year old? That's cool!And rhymin...Hey Lori, one year old? That's cool!<br>And rhyming picture books? They rule!<br>So add my name into the bin,<br>and maybe, maybe, I might win!aniprofhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05459493459341954889noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2835199408606594361.post-55368889209535527122010-04-02T12:36:29.890-05:002010-04-02T12:36:29.890-05:00Hi Lori,
Happy Blog Birthday! :)
I'd love t...Hi Lori,<br /><br />Happy Blog Birthday! :)<br /><br />I'd love to enter your contest! <br /><br />Fingers crossed...<br /><br />SheriSheri Dillardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04080158062172372260noreply@blogger.com